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Wednesday, September 1, 2021

Imagination is key!

 Hello!

Writing this week was focused on poetry and we could write about anything we could like! After a while of thinking coming up with many ideas I chose to write about an Imaginary city that I had in a dream! The type of poem I decided to do was a rhyming poem, and I love the ending that I came up with. I struggled with some words that rhyme with each other so I used the website rhyme zone to help me! Here is the link for my writing:Here 

After reading it, is there anything I could Improve on?







1 comment:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 5, 2021 at 9:00 PM

    Hi Olivia,

    I was intrigued to see what you had written for poetry this week - had to come and check it out... Really loved the theme you chose and how you presented it. It's great you found a tool to use to help you rhyme- that can be the trickiest part - reminds me of a book I love - Nothing rhymes with Orange.
    Can't see anything that you could improve on, perhaps a part 2??

    Keep up the great work!

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