From Planning to Writing!

 Kia Ora!

From last week to this week, my hub has been focusing on Explanation writing and we got to pick what to write about! While others wrote about the butterfly cycle, how to build a car and more I decided to write about the evolution of racism in  America. I focused on how many wrong decisions were made back then and how Racism is shown nowadays. I enjoyed writing about this because I wanted to show I felt about Racism myself but struggled with finding some information. In the end I am proud with what I have written and how it has turned out! Here is the link to my finished writing, and this is the link to my writing plan!

How to find Fractions of whole numbers

 Kia Ora!

This week we were focusing on 'How to find Fractions of whole numbers' and had to explain how to do it for our create.  At the start I was a bit confused but after a while I got it. Here is the link to my original one!

The plan...

Welcome back!

After the holidays and I'm back with what I do for learning! 

This week for writing, we had to fill out a planning template for next weeks writing.  We could write about anything we want but it has to be an explanation writing. 

After thinking for a while, I decided to do mine about explaining what Racism is and why it's bad.  I wanted to do this topic because I think it's important and I think it's unfair how they are judged.

I enjoyed researching about this and learning more about this, but struggled to find vocab and language features to use in my writing.

Overall I think I did well in my planning and would love for some feedback!

 Here is the link!